GENERATING IDEAS
Who was/were involved in the story?
-My
family and I
What happened?
- Went to camping
When did the story happen?
- On New Year last year
Where did the story happen?
-At Sky Hill camping, Suan Phueng, Ratchaburi
How did it happen?
How did it happen?
- I got the trip with my big family.
-We
went to Suan Phueng, Ratchaburi by car.
-We went to Alpaca Hill.
-We did a lot activities at Alpaca Hill.
How did the story end?
- I felt very happy and joyful
when I traveled with my big family.
MY FIRST CAMPING
On 31 December,2016. I got the trip with my big family. We went to camping at Sky-Hill camping. We
went to Suan Phueng, Ratchaburi by car. I felt very excited to
camping there and this is my first camping. We went there for countdown to New
Year 2016 with my family. The next morning, my
family and I went to visit the Alpaca hill. I enjoyed doing a lot of activities
there such as feeding the alpaca, sightseeing around the area, and adventure
Treasure of the Inca. It was a wonderful trip for me. I felt very happy and joyful
when I traveled with my big family






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